Poetry 101! help?
Alright, people of isitnormal forum.
Get ready for last minute poetry writing assignmnet rough copy:
1.
If I could build a wall across the sky
A gap looming between eden and thee
I would do naught such a thing
But relinquish any power given to me
For seperating two polar similarities
Would cause the heavens rage, all eternity
2.
Stars themselves have no names
Let the heavens reign over that choice
Alas, give me but a whisper, a hint, a smile.
Let me know i am thy master
The wind on my back, a gentle murmur
Stirs no feelings in this dark abyss
Unlike thee, a tumultous tempest, the essence of a storm
Let my loveflow beneath your skin
Where it will lie awake to the sound of delicious uncertainty
Pray to the sun, the moon and the earth
For my love will flow beneath your skin.
Waiting upon the elusive answer.
Thanks for reading.
Does the first peom convey enough info or is it too subtle?
Poetry is an easy and fun way to express oneself
lol did you even read my question?
no, but I will
I read them, just try a sonnet instead ok chap? I wrote one for my girlfriend, it turned out beautifully, expressed exactly how I felt
do you have it by any chance???
i'd be very greatful....i need to see some good examples.
I'm going with the first one, very clever
I'm going with the first one, very clever
-lotsofjunk
Thanks :)
no problemo
Guys who think about poetry must be gay.
"Once there was a dog name Jack...
He poo-pooed on the railroad track...
The train went by,
The poo-poo splashed high...
And hit the conductor right smack in the eye."
That's about all I know about poetry.
Guys who think about poetry must be gay.
"Once there was a dog name Jack...He poo-pooed on the railroad track...The train went by, The poo-poo splashed high...And hit the conductor right smack in the eye."
That's about all I know about poetry.-reyna
That's a pretty ignorant comment, I'm not trying to express suprise, I'm actually not suprised at all.
Reyna....you are pooltoy arent you?
That's what most people believe, it's not hard not too considering everything that happens on IIN and they have similar traits that seem to be trying to be hidden. If reyna is her own person, then great, another IIN'er, if not then pooltoy needs to get a life.
Reyna....you are pooltoy arent you?
-freeatheart
no dot, for the last time she is not me or vice versa.
no dot, for the last time she is not me or vice versa.
-p00ltoy
k
ok p00ltoy, im reyna
smoke my cock
my fcking world has just been officially fckd. i dont even know who i am anymore
I'm gonna come out with it, mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmkay?, I'm Lotsofjunk. I'll prove it by leaving a comment, saying I'm not MrMackie. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmkay?
my fcking world has just been officially fckd. i dont even know who i am anymore
-p00ltoy
you got that confused over IIN? You may want to check into the psyche ward for a little while (that's no insult)
